22 янв. 2016 г. · Let the character express his annoyance through the sound and his actions. I would never use an exclamation point after tsk.

17 апр. 2021 г. · A few little teeth lined it, looking like aspirin. His eyes told the real story of that horrible smile however. They had no color at all.

21 авг. 2022 г. · Something that may help is to think about the point of view for the scene in which you're describing this character.

21 окт. 2023 г. · Bacteria like moist warm condition and mouth is perfect one , so decay of teeth , loosening of teeth, gum infections, stained yellow teeth and ...

26 янв. 2014 г. · If you are writing about a character learning to grow through a bad decision, there are thousands of great examples in literature and essays to inspire you.

14 окт. 2019 г. · The “bad writing” comes in when a description is done wrong, usually in one of these ways: Info dumps. For example: this is Bella.

10 авг. 2018 г. · Think of events that happen to you. Pretend real hard they are happening again, and notice the feelings that produces.

13 апр. 2022 г. · A smile is always the doing of the eyes. The smile begins in the look she gets as she sees the thing that brings the eyes to see the bigger thing.

9 июл. 2020 г. · His lips are thin, stretched taut over teeth slightly yellowed. ... Why is it considered bad writing to describe a character's looks?

16 дек. 2020 г. · In “her teeth were like white pearls”, the writer is making the point by likening one with the other. The use of the words “like” or “as” are ...