27 окт. 2023 г. · The best way to depict crying is to detail the why and the physical symptoms of crying without focusing on the actual tears. If you do it just ...

4 июн. 2024 г. · Is the character angry-crying? Maybe try "He bawled", "she trembled", "they hissed." Is the character sad? You could use "sobbed", "wailed", or ...

15 февр. 2014 г. · Explain how they feel. You'll relate much better to the reader when you express inner feeling rather than the aesthetic of someone weeping.

31 окт. 2015 г. · I am writing about this one story where there it had rained the day before, and so I say later: Ben turned away from the class to hide his ...

16 апр. 2019 г. · “I'm really sad, that is why I am crying”, he said, with tears rolling down his cheeks, crying. “The tears that you see rolling down my cheeks ...

6 сент. 2018 г. · You need to give your character a compelling reason to cry. Even if the reader doesn't also feel the intensity of the emotion, they should at least understand ...

17 сент. 2023 г. · You can do it in action to show the emotion. JOE stares at Matt, tears well up in Joe's eyes. JOE sobs uncontrollably.

3 мая 2017 г. · One character is crying, wailing, and sobbing loudly, but I don't know how to write these sounds. Would I just write "Ahhha ha ha!", "Bwah! AHA!

10 сент. 2018 г. · Say somebody is crying and they have to catch their breath. When they inhale, their throat is unstable, which causes rapid and choppy breathing when taking air ...

21 нояб. 2021 г. · The character doing the comfort is a person who finds it uncomfortable and isn't good at comforting people or expressing feelings.